【IELTS寫作範例】- 電子遊戲(Video Games)

By CISM HK Staff


Nowadays, many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games.What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

In today’s world, many people, especially teenagers and children rely on video games as their main source of entertainment. While video games can prove to be fun and a great way to pass the time, they can also have some disadvantages.

Video games can be a great way to distract children from the stressful aspects of life. Many games with a good story, character development, and fun gameplay can easily help them with stress, which may help their mood. Not only can video games help distract kids from stress, but many kids have many options of playing video games that encourage movements, such as Wii Sports, or Pokemon Go. Pokemon Go encourages users to walk around in their city or town to catch pokemon, which is a great way to get fresh air, movement, and sunshine in their day. Games such as Wii sports have motion controls, giving the illusion that players are playing a sport. It can prove to be a workout and can have the possibility of keeping children healthy. 

While video games can be incredibly fun for anyone, it is important for players to balance their time between video games and responsibilities. Although it may be a fun way for children to spend their downtime, there needs to be a healthy balance between life and fun. If no discipline is encouraged, it could prove to be an issue. Children can easily be addicted to video games, which could lead them to be anti-social and distant from friends and family. It is important to use their time wisely and to take breaks consistently

Overall, video games may have some disadvantages, but as long as children use their time wisely when playing, it could be more of a benefit to children.

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